Comments on: Chapter 1: Chime! You Got Case (Part II)

By: Elaine Mercer

Elaine Mercer — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 21:26:59 +0000

Flexes fingers.

I’m not a bad DOOM player myself, but I don’t know if i want to run into a Pinky demon shaped gremlin of any size over 1m at equilibrium. They may not carry much amperage, but getting zapped can still sting!

By: daymon34

daymon34 — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 23:46:55 +0000

Doom, yeah that would make a mean looking Gremlin after a while.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 23:20:07 +0000

Great use of sound effects!

By: Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 17:19:37 +0000

Not at all! Tres good. Minor typographic and grammar mistakes are good things to clean out.

By: Mr. Caterpillar

Mr. Caterpillar — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 03:38:56 +0000

Hope my occasional suggestions don’t annoy; just want to get minor roadblocks out of the text.

By: Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 07:19:21 +0000

It looks like it’s “make do.” I shall correct that forthwith!

By: Mr. Caterpillar

Mr. Caterpillar — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 07:11:51 +0000

Is it “make due”, or “make do”?

By: Al

Al — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 19:08:33 +0000

Hey:
yes AI does dream