Comments on: Chapter 24: Through the Door (Part I) http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-24-through-the-door-part-i/ Not your ordinary detective agency Sat, 3 Jul 2010 03:12:33 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Kyt Dotson http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-24-through-the-door-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-352 Kyt Dotson Mon, 31 May 2010 02:54:15 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=319#comment-352 You're absolutely right, <b>daymon34</b> there should have been a break there. I don't know why it got erased (or not translated.) So I'm fixing this now. You’re absolutely right, daymon34 there should have been a break there. I don’t know why it got erased (or not translated.) So I’m fixing this now.

]]> By: daymon34 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-24-through-the-door-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-234 daymon34 Tue, 01 Dec 2009 23:01:36 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=319#comment-234 Well looks like Haliday is finally able to get somewhere, talking to herself is going to be fun though. And it's starting to look like the gremlins are having something to do with the elections, now just how are they doing it with them. As a note, you might want to either put another space or a line between perspective changes. That would help in warning that the change is there. I had to re-read each one to make sure I understood what happened. Well looks like Haliday is finally able to get somewhere, talking to herself is going to be fun though. And it’s starting to look like the gremlins are having something to do with the elections, now just how are they doing it with them.

As a note, you might want to either put another space or a line between perspective changes. That would help in warning that the change is there. I had to re-read each one to make sure I understood what happened.

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