Comments on: Chapter 3: The Case (Part I) http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-3-the-case-part-i/ Not your ordinary detective agency Sat, 3 Jul 2010 03:12:33 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Miladysa http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-3-the-case-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-149 Miladysa Fri, 25 Sep 2009 08:53:06 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=89#comment-149 You painted such a clear picture I felt that I was there! You painted such a clear picture I felt that I was there!

]]> By: Kyt Dotson http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-3-the-case-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-117 Kyt Dotson Sat, 12 Sep 2009 22:47:31 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=89#comment-117 Wow, that's a good catch! And also a solid suggestion, thanks. I will fix that. Wow, that’s a good catch! And also a solid suggestion, thanks. I will fix that.

]]> By: viv http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-3-the-case-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-116 viv Sat, 12 Sep 2009 21:43:41 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=89#comment-116 This is a very good chapter, and the last line comes as a real surprise. I just think the sentence below sounds sort of circular : "the severity of Emily’s Norse blood produced a severe aspect to her gaze", "austere", maybe ? This is a very good chapter, and the last line comes as a real surprise. I just think the sentence below sounds sort of circular :

“the severity of Emily’s Norse blood produced a severe aspect to her gaze”,

“austere”, maybe ?

]]> By: April http://www.blackhatmagick.com/dread-vote/chapter-3-the-case-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-42 April Tue, 23 Jun 2009 23:09:11 +0000 http://www.blackhatmagick.com/?p=89#comment-42 Pretty good post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wanted to say that I have really liked reading your blog posts. In any case I'll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon! Pretty good post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wanted to say
that I have really liked reading your blog posts. In any case
I’ll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon!

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